Outline Workshop

1. Show your commercial and the outline. 
2. Discuss some potential ways to improve. Focus on:
1. Clarity and specificity of the claims about purpose and effectiveness. 
2. Sufficiency and relevance of reasons to support the claims. 
3. Sufficiency and relevance of specific evidences to back up the reasons. 
4. Effectiveness of the introductory hook and the closing hook.
5. Overall organization of the outline. 
3. Each member should offer at least two substantive suggestions. 
4. Finally, go to your outline on your blog and revise it based on the feedbacks you received.